Sunday, August 22, 2004

Fetish

I discovered a new fetish last night involving one of the men on stage. He was concentrating on producing an awesome sound and succeeding beyond all expectations. His eyebrows set, mouth slightly downturned a small indent forming at the corner of his lips, and thats where I got hooked. There right next to his dimple. My mind set for the rest of the night in a longing to have, to watch, for something close to an eternity.

2 Comments:

Blogger Roger Stevens said...

Some interseting writing. I like the longer piece about the room.

You could develop that further.

And I think you should be more explicit. Really get into those dark corners.

8:19 pm, September 20, 2004  
Blogger Leviathan said...

I'll try! I have a fear of being too specific because some of this is about people who exist.

6:42 pm, September 22, 2004  

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